If you were born after 1992, your life will be completely consumed by the technological world around you. You will have at least one device on you at all times that connects you to an invisible world called THE INTERNET. Instead of physical interaction with people on a daily basis, you will communicate alone with a device that holds your entire life in your hands.
If all you know about the world is being connected to what many elders would call, technology, how are you in control of the world around you. For a moment observe your surroundings. Look at the person next to you sitting a few feet away and watch as they glare into that device. A device so powerful it drains all of our attention. Try interacting with that person and watch as they are drawn back to their device. Will you ever really cherish life’s precious moments, or will you be expending all of your energy into a mindless piece of humanity? Look around you once more and pretend it is 50 years ago.
The same person sitting next to you would have no choice but to look up and transmit the energy we all need to morally survive. Real physically energy between us as people is necessary for humanity to survive, yet we can’t help but be connected. Watch as the internet desperately sucks in your energy by creating standards that are soulless. The commercials on every site flying by at every moment, put forth by the same companies that strive for your addictive nature.
You are a generation of young people absorbed by a non-living entity that has found a way to trick you into believing it is a way of life. Run by private executives, with personal goals and purpose, the internet has found a way to take life’s most precious gift in your life. TIME is all we are given. Time to experience and enjoy the warmth of each other.
Try to remember in your young life the last time you sat down and spent a significant amount of time disconnected to the internet and connected to a loved one. These moments won’t happen very much in your life, if at all. Your memories as you grow old and near the end will be spent mostly with a “thing”. You won’t even understand life without the internet. And if the private entities that run that “thing” decide to shut down or turn off, will you be left BRAINDEAD?
Sereniti Sparkles 
This entry makes no sense at all.
First you say that people born after a certain year use the internet. So what?
Then you say something about energy passing between people. This paragraph actually makes sense, and I hoped that you would develop it.
Then you say that the internet has taken the most precious gift in my life. Money? Do you mean the connection fees?
Eventually you suggest that people who use internet are BRAINDEAD without showing evidence.
You are an idiot.
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I appreciate all of the constructive criticism there is to be had, however, when someone takes time out of their day to refer to another with such a derogatory statement, I must say you are the idiot that you refer to. I wish only to bring my consciousness into the world with my work. The great thing about this life is that it is ours to know individually and form our own perspectives. Never would I read another’s work of art and belittle it in such a way. Look into yourself and maybe you will understand why you would do such a thing. Positivity and love is the ultimate gift you can give so though in my own personal diary of life my opinions may be formed, I would never look at another persons expression and bring anything but that. If you would have said, I really liked that one part and wished you would have done more to develop it, it would have had a much greater impact on my work. But because you used a simple word like “idiot” I am responding and understanding as much as I need to about the commentator. So thank you for your time and attention and I hope you think twice about using hate or condescending statements next time.
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